Tower of Jack

Tower of Jack

by actionverb

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Graphic Violence
  • Profanity

To some, he’s an idiot savant, to others, he’s a high-functioning alcoholic. To almost everyone, he’s an arrogant asshole. Jack Atlas - self proclaimed “Worlds Best Assassin” has a problem. Earth’s integration into The Tower has ruined his life.

Jack was ready to retire… Well, he wasn’t actually ready to retire, but love makes you do crazy things.

Regardless of his feelings, he was hanging up his guns… and knives… and explosives… All for a chance at love with the most recent girl of his dreams. Enter 'The Tower' stage left. A cruel device designed by the gods to determine just who is the strongest race within the multiverse. Make it to the top and you get to join the gods in paradise. Everyone else gets to experience… not paradise.

Instead of sipping Mai Tai’s on some beach he can’t pronounce; it’s sipping health pots because he just got stabbed in the ass by a goblin. Instead of trips to Vegas with blackjack and hookers; it’s trips to creepy dungeons filled with skeletons and zombies.

Join Jack as he learns to adapt to his new life of “DnD nerd crap” while in search of the perfect multiverse-cocktail. Also, he might climb The Tower and kill a bunch of people while he’s at it…

***Chapters Monday, Wednesday, Friday***


What to Expect from this story:

An over the top action comedy, set to the backdrop of epic fantasy. 

Lots of cursing and wildly inappropriate humor.

A main character who will pass up the opportunity for OP legendary items because he doesn't want to miss happy hour at the bar.

Shenanigans. 

An anti-hero lead.

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Table of Contents
153 Chapters
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue ago
Chapter 1 - One Last Job ago
Chapter 2 - Punishment ago
Chapter 3 - Uninvited Guest ago
Chapter 4 - Core-Breaker Brew ago
Chapter 5 - Trial by Monsters Part 1 ago
Chapter 6 - Trial by Monsters Part 2 ago
Chapter 7 - Alcohol. Answers. Assassinations. ago
Chapter 8 - Banished ago
Chapter 9 - The B Team ago
Chapter 10 - The Cursed Dungeon of D*ck-Bag Skeletons ago
Chapter 11 - Ups and Downs ago
Chapter 12 - New Core. New me. ago
Chapter 13 - The Dream Team ago
Chapter 14 - We Need to Talk About Sarah ago
Chapter 15 - Return to Civilization ago
Chapter 16 - Wyrm not Worm ago
Chapter 17 - Monster Assassinations ago
Chapter 18 - Budget Dragonborn ago
Chapter 19 - Rodeo's Rough House ago
Chapter 20 – I Am Monster. Hear Me Roar.  ago
Chapter 21 - Christmas in Clearglen ago
Chapter 22 - Mission Prep ago
Chapter 23 - The United Forces of Earth ago
Chapter 24 - Storm Step ago
Chapter 25 - We're Adventurers Now! ago
Chapter 26 – Training Montage Part 1 ago
Chapter 27 – Training Montage Part 2 ago
Chapter 28 - Stupid Sexy Mermaids ago
Chapter 29 - The Sparrow's Flintlock ago
Chapter 30 – The Hitman and The Saintess ago
Chapter 31 - Failure ago
Chapter 32 – Xogon Barbarians ago
Chapter 33 - Recovery ago
Chapter 34 - The Rule of Scooby-Doo ago
Chapter 35 – How NOT to Assassinate a Werebear ago
Chapter 36 - The Lightning Centipede ago
Chapter 37 - Sammy ago
Chapter 38 – Storm Stance ago
Chapter 39 - The Two Drop Special ago
Chapter 40 – Of Gods and Men ago
Chapter 41 - Everything is Broken ago
Chapter 42 - Negotiations ago
Chapter 43 – Stolen Property ago
Chapter 44 - Soul Oath ago
Chapter 45 – Just Deserts ago
Chapter 46 - Oathbreaker ago
Chapter 47 - Just the Two of Us ago
Chapter 48 – The Killer and the Thief Part 1 ago
Chapter 49 – The Killer and the Thief Part 2 ago
Chapter 50 – Seasoned Adventurers ago
Chapter 51 – Old Jack ago
Chapter 52 - Distractions ago
Chapter 53 - Flight of the Valkyries ago
Chapter 54 - Prisoner ago
Chapter 55 - First place ago
Chapter 56 – Red Vs Blue ago
Chapter 57 – Call to Arms ago
Chapter 58 – Exposure Therapy  ago
Chapter 59 – Treasure ago
Chapter 60 – The Enemy of my Enemy ago
Chapter 61 – Friction ago
Chapter 62 – Festivities  ago
Chapter 63 – Surprise Attack ago
Chapter 64 – Assault  ago
Chapter 65 – Halldis the Shadow Witch  ago
Chapter 66 – Me, Myself & I ago
Chapter 67 – Phase Two  ago
Chapter 68 - Surrender ago
Chapter 69 - Moment's Respite ago
Chapter 70 – A Chance Meeting ago
Chapter 71 - Secrets ago
Chapter 72 – Gideon the Golden Dragon ago
Chapter 73 – The Barracks Job Pt. 1  ago
Chapter 74 – The Barracks Job Part 2 ago
Chapter 75 - Trust Issues ago
Chapter 76 - Static Overdrive ago
Chapter 77 - Escape ago
Chapter 78 - King Gurthok  ago
Chapter 79 – Prewar Festivities.  ago
Chapter 80 - War ago
Chapter 81 – Battle of the Dungeon Bosses ago
Chapter 82 – Final Stand ago
Chapter 83 - Loot ago
Chapter 84 – Haunted  ago
Chapter 85 – Old Enemies ago
Chapter 86 – Summoned ago
Chapter 87 - The Rough House ago
Chapter 88 - Deal with the Devil  ago
Chapter 89 - Fear ago
Chapter 90 – Frenemies  ago
Chapter 91 - Monster ago
Chapter 92 – Mental Warfare  ago
Chapter 93 – The Red Cross ago
Chapter 94 – The Not so Gentle Rain ago
Chapter 95 – Josh Globe ago
Chapter 96 - Raids ago
Chapter 97 - So you’re saying there's a chance… ago
Chapter 98 - Nightmare ago
Chapter 99 -  Moral Dilemma ago
Chapter 100 - Intentions ago
Chapter 101 - Soul Oaths Two, Electric Boogaloo ago
Chapter 102 – Overleveled ago
Chapter 103 – Three’s Company ago
Chapter 104 - Bird Problems ago
Chapter 105 – Old Habits ago
Chapter 106 - Golden Threads ago
Chapter 107 – Blood  ago
Chapter 108 - Vote ago
Chapter 109 – Runaway  ago
Chapter 110 - What do you want? ago
Chapter 111 - Xinnolath ago
Chapter 112 - Shoe Drop ago
Chapter 113 - Deals  ago
Chapter 114 - Consequences ago
Chapter 115 - Negotiations ago
Chapter 116 - Fatebreaker ago
Chapter 117 - Lightning Engine  ago
Chapter 118 - One Last Rodeo ago
Chapter 119 - Pangea ago
Chapter 120 - No Core. No Problem.  ago
Epilogue - Dark Storm ago
General Update #1 ago
Part 2: Prologue - Shadow and Flame ago
Chapter 121 – New Beginnings ago
Chapter 122 – Epic  ago
Chapter 123 – Pink Orcs ago
Chapter 124 – Rank Nine ago
Chapter 125 - Arbiter ago
Chapter 126 – Overconfident ago
Chapter 127 – Bone Titan ago
Chapter 128 – New Enemies ago
Chapter 129 – Hannah, where the f**k are you?  ago
Chapter 130 – Sanctuary.  ago
Chapter 131 – The not so secret quest ago
Chapter 132 - The Turtle Job ago
Chapter 133 – Surrender ago
Chapter 134 – I’m in charge now ago
Chapter 135 - Reunion  ago
Chapter 136 – Jack Versus the Black Centipede ago
Chapter 137 – Suspicious ago
Chapter 138 – Mercenaries ago
Chapter 139 - Plans ago
Chapter 140 - Danger Level Three ago
Chapter 141 – Gentrification ago
Chapter 142 – Bone Zone ago
Chapter 143 – Spine Forest ago
Chapter 144 – Rattlespine ago
Chapter 145 – Future Plans ago
Chapter 146 –  Peace Treaty.  ago
Chapter 147 – Death Knights ago
Chapter 148 – Supervillian  ago
Chapter 149 – Golden Star ago

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Joda
Overall

This could have been a good story, but the MC is the worst. He's supposed to be a great assasin, but he seems to lack the preservation instincts that someone in that field should have. He's careless and antagonistic beyond reason.

The plot is ok but generic. The people of earth are all pulled away to this magic tower because reasons. There is a system that grants classes, skills, and abilities. They have to climb the tower or die.

76appleJAX#1882
Overall

I am starting to hate the protagonist.

Reviewed at: Chapter 85 – Old Enemies

Protagonist is a little to over the top with his Frank Sinatra I did it my way attitude.  It is one thing to just go with your gut and ignore advice.  However, he wouldn't even listen to a healer with decades more experience.  There is being an individual and being a full.  The fact that luck keeps allowing him to come out of these situations practically unscathed is getting old.  

SpaceInvaderPro
Overall

The prologue gives you straight-up, high-fantasy vibes and a scope of the world being built. It's interesting, expansive, and leaves you with lots of questions.

Then you meet Jack. Oh man, do I love Jack. 

While the story is full of fun fantasy tropes, Jack is a breath of fresh air. He's irreverent, funny, and an endearing asshole. He's not the typical main character who gets everything handed to him; though there is plenty of Deux Ex Machina; he skips over relevant quest details, breaks important items, and spends his skill points in a ridiculous way that absolutely makes a goofy lop-sided character.

I love it.

He also really cares about his team, a colorful cast who are interesting and brings new elements to the story. This duality is what makes the story interesting and provides redeeming qualities to what could otherwise be a flat character. He's an asshole by day, caring protector by night, with a growing backstory that helps explain it all.

If you are looking for a fun read to make you laugh while also providing a solid story arc and some great LitRPG elements, this is it. 

pepperlikesalt
Overall

A story the embraces the absurdity of LitRPG

Reviewed at: Chapter 74 – The Barracks Job Part 2

I almost stopped reading this story several times throughout the early chapters as I encountered several warning signs of a powerwank story: unexpectedly helpful cabals, interventionist gods, overpowered rare classes, and items "cursed" with awesome power. Luckily, I read long enough to realize that these events are as important as they seem, and this is a world where a person's potential can be boiled down to some numbers on a character sheet.

Chevalier_9292
Overall

The story is very enjoyable, the action is gripping and the dose and feel makes you want to come back for more. This coupled with the fast release date(at that time) makes it one of my favorite stories when he still released chapters.

There are part of the story that could have gone better move development with his mentor/archnemesis, less simping for the girlfriend and the rivalry with the dragon.

This could still go either way, as the dragon can still become an enemy and the master is still not dead. The dragon can kill the girlsfriend and then the MC kills the dragon with his master, a lot of way it can go.


Overall this story is not finished and even with the ending being sudden it went on a decent point just like Supervillainy and Other Poor Career Choices and just like the aformentioned book I still find myself coming back from time to check if there is an answer to my comment and that says something about how much I enjoyed it.

P.S Author come back or do not come back but just put us out of our misery at least.

suisimp
Overall

I was honestly pretty happy with the story, even with the problems of the MC. It had signs of improving, the MC was grappling with his mental issues.

Then near end of the second book book, the author decides that the whole story is going to be the classic MC whose mind has been completely broken and only driven by revenge, and broken body with no ability to use mana. Even worse, this time we know that the MC will not be redeemable. MC goes from a complex character grappling with a complex personal situation, to a one minded bot, whose potential for character growth has already been killed by information about his end state.

Some of the other reviewers here note the MC being braindead in early chapters. I was willing to put up with that, because there were signs that MC would grow as a character, being made more complex. It was dangled, then wiped out irrevocably in an instant. Potential for character growth is dead.

Story has been bait and switched, so I'm dropping, and don't recommend starting it.

bloomer18
Overall

Engaging world and characters.  Enjoy the tongue-in-cheek humor, literary and historical barbs, and the fast pace.  You're bringing your audience along and giving your cast of characters some semi redeeming traits despite their...excintricities.  Makes you want to root for your cast, warts and all. Curious to meet Sarah and looking forward to seeing it all play out

Flamebeard
Overall

Worth reading in its current state

Reviewed at: Chapter 103 – Three’s Company

TLDR: 5/5 stars, good tower integration with good characters. Worth reading.

Tower of Jack is a standard tower integration novel. Gods are prevalent and...meddly as well as the Tower itself being more than willing to stick its fingers where they don't belong. The primary appeal is the characters -- namely Jack -- their dark secrets in their past, and how they grow to overcome them. This is one of those fictions where the main character is missing a few cards in his deck and is proud of it. 

Tower of Jack is an odd one. On the one hand, the introduction to Jack is rather polarizing and I feel that it failed to properly excite me regarding what was coming next. He comes off as an idiot or suicidal with a rather uninspiring amount of plot armor, rather than the ultra-competent assassin wearing the mask of a buffoon. That bothered me, but on the other hand, the story has a setting, plot, characters, the works. It isn't a mindless murder fest, nor is it a repetitive comedy that gets stale after three chapters. My only complaint is that the setting and magic system are a little stale (for me), but they don't get in the way and get the job done. 

The story gets lost at times, and there were at least a few occasions where I felt like the plot lost an argument with a brick wall. That being said, I enjoyed what was written currently, and encourage you to give it a try yourself. 

Style notes: The author uses nonstandard -- I think -- definitions/spellings for the words reigned and nonplussed. From the context, reigned=rained, and nonplussed=unperturbed. 

Temet Nosce
Overall

The premise of this fic is a sort of extremely assholeish James Bond esque stand in, the problem comes in with the point that one, despite being extremely skilled he regularly chooses to do things that screw himself and those around him over, and two it never matters.

 

Despite the problems, the fic has involved characterization, eschews basic writing errors, and has interesting world building. Unfortunately, the tendency to write events that neither follow motivations well, nor are the result of compelling or interesting characterization leaves it an exercise in frustration.

 

E.G. the love triangle comes across as stalker-ish (and awkward), the former mentor interaction seems to be driven towards a specific conclusion, the protagonist caves to minimal intimidation despite supposedly being freedom loving.

 

Succinctly put, the characters well character, should matter. Although the assholery isn't great to read either.

Patryk Rys
Overall

Great mc, cool world, funny, everything you want

Reviewed at: Chapter 31 - Failure

Cain from "heroes die" meet litrpg.

Great mc is the force that push forward this novel. Drunk, asshole assasin (im sorry, hitman! Dont tell him I called him assasin)

Great comedy/action in tower simmilar to "tower of god". 

I love all the references and "hey fuckface" got me giggling, not gonna lie.

And I swear to god, they should learn to stop throwing glass potions, they are really expensive. 

Read it, you will not regret that